what do you think of draft 2 ?

Heyhey,

so this is the second draft of the poster for the door of my future sewing studio. What do you think, is it better? Do you have more ideas and suggestions? Thank you!

lp-1.aspxthats the first draft again:lp.aspx

keep sewing and smiling

your TailorFairy

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15 comments

  1. Personally – I like the second design better – the colours are more in harmony…
    I am working as well on my sewing studio 🙂 I have to think about the poster as well… on the list! Thanks 🙂

  2. In the second paragraph, I would put the ‘here’ after knitting courses rather than at the start of the sentence and change ‘do’ to ‘run’ i.e. “I also run on-on-one…” and add ‘can’ to “where I CAN help you start…”

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